I NEED OPINIONS OF MY WRITING, NAMELY THIS POEM. BE HONEST PLEASE. IT'S SHORT DONT WORRY! thanx!?

Hi. This is really good, lovely poem. I like the topic and your words choices between the stanzas, you painted a beautiful picture words, and you makes your readers feel what you are feeling, this is very good in a poet. Some good images it makes this poem flow nicely. I love your poetic persona. Keep this up.