Argument/persuasive essay on Gay Marriage.?

Its very interesting to find you have done your essay on this subject because Im doing the same. Your essay is very good. The introduction was catchy, i did want to keep reading. however, you should use more sources as to back up your argument. Remember you going to have people disagree with you so make sure you have concrete reals otherwise you're good to go GREAT JOB AND GOOD LUCK